This picture looks really nice, since this is the first one that really looks like a MIB guy. Though you might want to fix him up a bit (he looks a little flat) and defenitly put some glare in those glasses of his. Keep up the good work, soilder.
Reviewer: WOLFGAL
Date: 6th August 2004
9/10
Good! But he looks more like Nava.
Reviewer: kitten
Date: 13th September 2004
10/10
Very cool! Your best fan art and one of the best cano-sapien drawings I have seen!
the same as the other matrix pic but it could d with a tweak or 2
Reviewer: K-wolf 704
Date: 13th December 2003
10/10
hey Sweet Fur Amy, u always know that I enjoy your artwork! It looks great & it's pretty cool that ur getting ur artwork published on the internet!
Reviewer: General Von Stryker
Date: 10th May 2004
5/10
Not to be hard, but her boobs look like their saggy (this wasn't my comment)
Reviewer: Justy
Date: 20th July 2004
9/10
Hey Sweet Fur Amy, next time you do another pic like that, try it with Jenna riding on that Sport bike like in The Matrix Reloaded, above all, nicely done.
Yukon can I email it to you. It's not on web. Email me at kaw_kaw711@yahoo.com .
Seeya, Sweet Fur Amy
Reviews:
Reviewer:
Date: 21st September 2003
10/10
I love this pic. It is so cool. Even though I don't like the Matrix.
Reviewer:
Date: 21st September 2003
5/10
Sure it's a good pic, but i'm going to have to rate based on the fact that there are still a lot of improvements that can be made. I have to compare it to other images, like AC's 10/10 star pic and Silver Huskey's 7/10 "Steele in the Snow" pic. If I look at it comparitively I see a 5/10 - but keep working at your art and you'll get better!
Reviewer: snow-wolf
Date: 1st November 2003
7/10
its ok but it could do with come more effects
Reviewer: Ditz
Date: 3rd January 2004
7/10
This is cool. xD
Reviewer: WOLFGAL
Date: 6th August 2004
10/10
NEAT!
Reviewer: Kitten
Date: 13th September 2004
8/10
Nice!
Reviewer: She_Wolf_Jena
Date: 13th November 2004
6/10
It's ok. But Yukon's right.
Reviewer: whitewolf27
Date: 1st March 2005
6/10
I guess it's ok, but yukon is right sweet fur army. keep practicing!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 3rd March 2005
6/10
It's just strange thinking about Jenna being like that. Oh, well, it's better than what I can draw! 6/10!
This story takes place in New York. Jenna, Balto, Charlie, Sasha, and Colleen are professional wrestlers for the WWE. On March 14, 2004 they’ll star in WrestleMania XX.
Reviews:
Reviewer:
Date: 13th September 2004
3/10
That left a little to be desired. No one wants to know every detail of what they are wearing and eating, it just drew everything out and did not add to the story. Also, the fight sequences could have been more descriptive, it would have made the plot more exciting. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories as you progress as a writer.
*I am a HUGE car buff. I have a friend who has a porsche. Very cool; good car choice.*
Reviewer:
Date: 14th September 2004
10/10
i like it cuz balto and road rovers and 2 wwf is the crap where icp started there chaos in wrestling federation
Reviewer: juggaloguyfromicp
Date: 14th September 2004
10/10
sorry but brock lessner left wwe for football sorry but that just got though my head.still good job
Reviewer: Articpup
Date: 4th January 2004
7/10
It's cute but the markings are a bit off
Reviewer: Rocker Punk
Date: 24th October 2004
10/10
I love how you described Colleen. She was my favorite character since she has a personality like Amy Dumas A.K.A. Lita. Team X-treme ROCKS!! :)
Reviewer: BALTO
Date: 15th June 2005
10/10
I LIKE IT,I LOVE IT I WANT TO READ IT AGAIN!ONLY...1.IT'S A LITTLE TOOOOO POINTED AT CHARLIE 2.THEY'RE LIKE HUMANS! 3.IT HAS SOME DEAD SENCES:THE PUPS HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH THE STORY,AND BALTO MEETING HIS DAD AGAIN?A LITTLE OFF LIMIT.OTHER THAN THAT,I LIKE IT. :)
Reviewer: silver_balto
Date: 16th August 2005
6/10
Warship teh coolness dare! I liked it. One thing though, you didn't meantion all the characters that youye xplained in the beginning. Not a really big thing, but a thing none the less.
Nothing really bad about it except it's waaay too short...but nothing really good about it either. The story is too much like something they force you to read in the first year of primary school...static. Needs more to hold the interest of the reader. So content could have been improved drastically, and so could the style. All comes with practice, experience and knowledge that you gain when you get a little older...
Reviewer:
Date: 14th September 2003
[comment]
It was my first fanfic. Take it easy on me.
Reviewer:
Date: 21st September 2003
9/10
It's okay. even though it's short it still is good. It is funny too. I love humor. Sweet fur Amy could do a little bit better but the her story is still good.
Reviewer: Loner
Date: 27th September 2003
4/10
I think am going to agree with Zaive on this one. You need to make it in more a story form then in a script.Also watch your grammer mistakes.
Reviewer: snow-wolf
Date: 1st November 2003
8/10
its good but it could be longer but a good plot
Reviewer: Spirit of the North
Date: 15th December 2003
[comment]
I'm a critic and I must say I hated it. It was annoying. Could you make the dialogue more...interesting? It needs to be longer, too. I'm working on my own fanfic, and it's a few pages worth for the first part. I think its..um...lemme go count...8 pages for part 1, yes. Please try harder!
Reviewer: baltohaterburner
Date: 14th February 2004
4/10
Its good......But it is definatly too short. If i can read it in a minute then it is short. Work on your next one. You will get better over time.
Reviewer: Spirit of the North
Date: 20th April 2004
5/10
I'm sorry SFA, I was in a bit of a bad mood when I said that, I had been fighting with someone. Your fanfic isn't really that bad.
Reviewer: Balto
Date: 12th October 2004
10/10
did u know that i think your fanfics and fanart rock?
Reviewer:
Date: 15th June 2005
4/10
PRETTY STUPID!DOGS AREN'T HUMANS...BUT I LIKE IT ANYWAY:)
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