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Comments:  I love wolfs. Thats why i like balto. I used to b good at drawing until my art teacher ruined it for me. My quote: candy is dandy but liquer is quicker
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Betrayl and Old Friends [revised]
 baltohaterburner
[Fan Fiction]Quick-rating: [58% out of 5 votes] Length: 2,481
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Date added: 28th February 2004
Last viewed: 18th December 2024
Views: 321
Warning: This fanfic contains strong language! Viewer discretion is advised!

This is the sequel to the first BALTO CELL. This FANFIC contains mature language. View at own risk.

*Revised 12 March 2005: This is the revised version of my second fanfic. I checked it like 50 times i hope theres no more errors. Enjoy. Warning Crude adult content!!!
 Reviews:
  Reviewer: Ania Huskote Date: 4th April 2004 10/10
 Wow that's really good Bhb! That's cool how u put Verta in it.
  Reviewer: Beomech Date: 4th April 2004 8/10
 ...did you have to make Verta die? *sighs* Oh, well it was before we all met...
Pretty good story, excluding that part...
  Reviewer: Date: 4th April 2004 [comment]
 Im still kicking myself...i mixed jenna and sasha up...my bad im not perfect
  Reviewer: Firewolf Date: 4th April 2004 10/10
 Great Job! but you didn't have to kill Verta?! but i'll be gone for awhile. [walks away]
  Reviewer: SovietWolf Date: 21st April 2004 4/10
 This story was better than the first but still it would never be CONSIDERED literature.Heck even middle eastern books on jihad would be considered masterpieces but why did boris want balto to knock off a DAA agents?
  Reviewer: Ania Huskote Date: 24th April 2004 10/10
 Shut up u freaks!!!! Say something nice about Bhb's fanfic!!! He's one of my best freinds in the world and u freaks should stop saying crap about it and the other fanfics!!!!!
  Reviewer: baltohaterburner Date: 27th April 2004 [comment]
 Ahh i c u like splinter cell....i am a amature writer, so dont b so friggin harsh....i bet if i played u online on Splinter Cell pandora tomarrow ur ass would b canned
  Reviewer: Kitten Date: 8th October 2004 9/10
 Sweet
  Reviewer: Titanic Date: 8th May 2005 10/10
 That is the collest thing ever. Death distrection and Balto, finaly some one got it right.
  Reviewer: Rail wolf Date: 22nd May 2005 9/10
 Awsome story. The only thing I have to say is that it almost sounds like thay are trying to cuss. I understand that in certin situations, we let things lose but thare ware places ware a cuss seemed kinda outa place. other then tha,t this is one of the coolest Balto storys I've read.
  Reviewer: Date: 26th July 2005 [comment]
 This isn't really about, you know, you're art, but if you like Balto so much, why is you're username BaltoHATERBURNER?
  Reviewer: Date: 11th November 2005 8/10
 Very good! I like it, alot
  Reviewer: Date: 16th November 2005 10/10
 Hey, bhb! Good work... AGAIN! **I write fanfiction, too... but I write on fanfiction.net... and mine are mostly on "Super Smash Brothers Melee" and "Legend of Zelda"...** But, anyway! Go you!
BALTO CELL
 baltohaterburner
[Fan Fiction]Quick-rating: [71.33% out of 15 votes] Length: 1,265
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Date added: 12th February 2004
Last viewed: 21st December 2024
Views: 255
This is my first FanFic ever. I decided to base it on Tom Clancys Splinter Cell cuz I thought that Balto and A Stealth shooter would be cool together.
 Reviews:
  Reviewer: Date: 24th February 2004 1/10
 Very poorly written. I noticed a few things that made me upset:
1. There was voilence and killing which I did not like.
2. The president cannot declare war. The president can only make treaties with other country, but he cannot declare war on another country. Only congress can.
3. I also saw some mistakes in the text. I know this may seem harsh but I must say it was horrible.
  Reviewer: baltohaterburner Date: 24th February 2004 [comment]
 If you watch the news they clearly say that the PRESIDENT declared war. Sorry i just wanted to point that out.
  Reviewer: baltohaterburner Date: 24th February 2004 [comment]
 I know that congress declares but it just SAID that the PRESIDENT declares war.
  Reviewer: Date: 24th February 2004 10/10
 Excellent job BHB, I am sitting on edge waiting for you to get the second part done, I hope that it is as good as this part of the story. -Alpine
  Reviewer: Firewolf Date: 25th February 2004 10/10
 Great Job BHB! I'll give you a 10 out of 10 because it was so good! Can't wait to read 2nd part!
  Reviewer: Ania Huskote Date: 25th February 2004 8/10
 Lay off Ewolf it wuzn't horrible
  Reviewer: Verta Date: 29th February 2004 10/10
 hola senoir! , damn great job, lol, this is the *counts the number of times shes read it, but looses track*o well, ill say about 500.. lol great job
  Reviewer: Sombra Date: 3rd April 2004 10/10
 Great job BHB! I thought it was good. Keep it up!
  Reviewer: SovietWolf Date: 19th April 2004 2/10
 Not exactly a good fic, it wasn't polliticly correct.The president cannot declare war, unless he is a Dictator and grammer wasn't good. Check your fic when you complete your rough draft, and check for mistakes and then type the final copy(If needed ask your parents). But for now the only good thing about this story is that the letters appear perfectlly on the screen(plus the violence).
  Reviewer: BHB's friend Date: 21st April 2004 8/10
 O wait whats the red phone in the office for, to call his mommy.*chuckles*
  Reviewer: Balto Date: 7th September 2004 [comment]
 ive never read it but if thats what it said no way the president does that!
  Reviewer: Kitten Date: 8th October 2004 10/10
 So what if he put the pres. declared war. Thats stupid if that is all you base the review on. I thought it was quite good.
  Reviewer: Balto Date: 13th October 2004 [comment]
 actually i have read it i just cant remember that part and yes i read in Social Studies that the president CAN declare war
  Reviewer: redwolf03 Date: 22nd February 2005 4/10
 I didn't think much of it. Violence just isn't me. Oh well, good luck with your next fan fic! I'll be back to find out what happens to Jenna.
  Reviewer: Date: 26th July 2005 10/10
 I loved et!
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