The story begins in Nome, The owners of Steele, Sage, Balto and Jenna, Rylie and Scout, Decoy, Brendon, and Banshee were all soon to be on their way to another town for a while, but they needed someone to look after their dogs for them. Hunter, the grey Malamute, and Copper, the Eskimo dog are back, and pick a final fight with Balto and his gang. We also find out a little bit about Hunter’s past. Scout’s owner knows someone who lives in a town, hundreds of miles away, at the other end of a mountain range, and decided to leave their dogs with her. A few days after the dogs were left under the watchful eyes of Deborah, the homesick canines begin to worry about their owners because they hadn’t come back. Balto decides to leave Deborah, and make his way back to Nome. He manages to convince his friends to tag along, and they even meet two new friends along the way, who decides to travel with them. But what the dogs don’t know is, the mountain range is a lot bigger, and more dangerous than they think. They face many problems trying to find their way back. Like, dealing with Decoy, a spirited pup, and climbing over treacherous terrains, swimming through rushing water, and outsmarting wild animals. When they finally make it home, Dakota, who is now a year-and-a-half old, is ready for a practice run with his mail dog sled team. Then it’s Anela’s turn to live her dream, to live in the wild with her two wolf friends, and their pack.
Reviews:
Reviewer:
Date: 22nd August 2005
10/10
I haven¨t read this story,But I Think that it is good one I wish to write one but you know I m not coming from usa or canada so its hard to write english story...:P and well... there will come too many spelling errors so what I need to do?
The puppies are now a little over a year old, and Dakota begins to chase after his dream of being a sled dog. But then, Star, Steele, and the butcher witness Balto being dog-napped. They tell the rest of the dogs, and the town finds out after the butcher tells them what happened, and the news spreads all around the world. Hunter and Copper are back, and during the night, Jenna is under the floor of the hospital, and then Hunter comes in to try to win her over, but she is saved by Steele, Nikki, Kaltag, and Star. Amber is also in back. She is crushed when she finds out that Balto is missing, and is scared that she will never see him again. But Amber, Hunter, and Copper team up and figure out a plan to make Jenna Hunter’s mate, and Balto Amber’s mate. Meanwhile, Balto was taken to the town of Kotzebue, and is being used as a sled dog with a team made up of other dogs that were also stolen from Nome. But they are kept miserable and mistreated, But they manage to escape thanks to Balto. The dogs are brought home, but Balto travels on foot. He meets a lone female wolf named Nakita. The two become good friends, and they travel back to Nome together. When he gets back, yet another problem occurs. Jenna sees Balto and Amber alone in his team house one night, and the next day, a rumor flies through the town about the two of them. Jenna and Balto get into a huge fight, and Jenna ends it with him. Luckily, Nikki, Kaltag, and Star find Jenna, and tell her what really happened, and how Balto really feels. Will she forgive him? Well what are you looking at this for? Start reading!
Reviews:
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 19th July 2005
8/10
Nice story! The only thing that kinda bugged me about it was how every couple of pages there was a fight. I was really glad Steele got tired of the fighting and didn't start one himself! Besides all the fights, it was pretty good. Can't wait for the next one!
It always seems like Jenna is the cause of the problem in your stories. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, I just wish she would fight back a little more and drive her enemies away herself. Anyway, I think your first story and this one are WAY better than B2 and B3. It's like watching a movie inside my head. This is GREAT! What I like best is your dialogue and your plot, you make it so smooth and easy and unexpected. The only thing wrong is some spelling and grammar errors. This deserves a standing ovation! *LOUD APPLAUSE* Bravo, bravo! Encore, encore!
Reviewer: Balto Hero
Date: 30th June 2005
8/10
I like youre story(mutch), it's really good.So here you got 8p. of me!
A Shepard/Malamute lead dog named Bandit and his team come into town with their sick team mate. They must stay in town for a few days while their team member is at the vet. Bandit tries to seduce Jenna, and turns her against Balto. Balto is caught attacking Bandit and must run away to be kept from being put to sleep, and pals up with his white wolf friend, Kemo. Jenna is miserable and goes to look for him. Dixie, Steele, Togo, Nikki, Kaltag, Star, Blaze, and Sage end up going to look for her as well. What dangers will they face in the wild? This is the toughest situation the dogs have ever faced! Will they make it home in one piece? When they finally do, Balto is able to prove to the town that he’s not a bad dog, he’s still the hero that he always was.
Reviews:
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 28th March 2005
9/10
Great story! You really made the characters come alive. The only things wrong were some grammar mistakes and misspellings, but otherwise it was AWSOME!
Reviewer: Copper
Date: 29th March 2005
10/10
Hey, DogJeremy! Stop being an idiot to the writers. It's their desicion, and maybe some of them are older and want to put in some better description! Maybe some are NEW to writing Fanfics!! If you can write better, then do so. By the way, I'm 11. I have no objection to what anyone writes. I watch 18 movies, for Heavens sake!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Anyway, the story was so good, I saved it in my computer to read over and over again!
KEMO!!!! (Sorry, I love Kemo)
Reviewer: Yukon
Date: 29th March 2005
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*deletes DogJeremy's review* - thanx for letting me know about it, David.
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 29th March 2005
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Uh...what are you guys talking about? Did DogJeremy (whoever he is) do a really bad review? *growls* Glad you deleted it Yukon, even though I didn't get to read it to see what all the fuss is about.
Reviewer: Kitten
Date: 31st March 2005
9/10
Whoa! Drama, action... great story!!
Reviewer:
Date: 31st March 2005
6/10
it was good but i didnt like the way it ended and some of it was hard to understand
Reviewer:
Date: 1st April 2005
10/10
I must say very good! Your story inspired me to create a story alittle bit like it! It's called, "The New Dog."
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