Comments: My real name is Cailin, and I'm 12. I love dogs and wolves, so I guess that's why I like Balto. He's part dog and part wolf, which makes him really cool. Plus, my middle name is Jenna, and the red husky in Balto I is named Jenna too. That's another reason I like it.
Balto recounts the past to Jenna as he works to reveal a terrible secret.
Reviews:
Reviewer: Cole The Coywolf
Date: 3rd October 2005
10/10
It was a great story about Balto and Jenna's past. I was just BLOWN AWAY by it. Keep them up.
Reviewer: Balto875
Date: 8th October 2005
9/10
When I saw your name I had to check it out on my scale Redwolf's one of the best
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 8th October 2005
[comment]
*blushes a little and scuffs one paw around in the dirt* Aw, shucks, I'm just an amateur that loves writing about Balto. But thanks, guys. :)
Reviewer: Lone Wolf_fanwriter
Date: 25th October 2005
10/10
Very nicely done, you ought to send this one to BaltoSource! You did an excellant job on Balto and Jenna's past. Keep it up!
Reviewer: Lone Wolf_fanwriter
Date: 25th October 2005
10/10
Very nicely done, you ought to send this one to BaltoSource! You did an excellant job on Balto and Jenna's past. Keep it up!
Reviewer: kyle
Date: 13th November 2005
5/10
well although i enjoyed your story i must point out one very critical mistake. once an animal is infected with the rabies virus it will take full effect on said animal in a peroid of 1 to 2 days and if the animal is truely infected with the virus there is no way for its body to fight off the disease
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 13th November 2005
[comment]
So you're saying there's no way Nanuq could've fought off the disease long enough to talk to Balto, and that Balto couldn't have carried the disease for that long without going crazy and dying? Well, maybe some kind of new bacteria was in the rabies that prevented it for Balto. Who knows? Besides, "He's...Balto!" Amazing things can happen with him.
Reviewer: El Fuego
Date: 4th December 2005
10/10
Si el Balto me consique una tarjeta verde que e'l es mi amigo!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 4th December 2005
[comment]
Gee, I wish I spoke Spanish! Well, thanks for the rating anyway! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: SAPM
Date: 2nd January 2006
10/10
I LOVE IT YOU SHOULD WRITE A 2 ONE WHEN HE DOSE GET RABBIES!!!!!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 3rd January 2006
[comment]
*pondering* Hmmm...kill off Balto? *winces* I don't know, I don't really want to murder Balto. I mean, he's BALTO. But, maybe...I'll think about it. Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: SAPM
Date: 5th January 2006
10/10
BUT HIS MOM COMES AND SAVES HIM
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 6th January 2006
[comment]
Er...how? You can't save somebody from rabies. They just die and there's nothing you can do about it.
Reviewer: SAPM
Date: 20th January 2006
10/10
I MEAN LIKE HE JOINS HIS MOTHER UP IN HAVEN FOR A WEEK THEN HE ASKS HER IF HE CAN STAY ON EARTH FOR A AWALE HM?
This is “book” one of the ‘A Second Chance’ series. (See ‘Introduction: A Second Chance’ for the whole beginning.)
Reviews:
Reviewer: whitewolf27
Date: 25th April 2005
10/10
whoa! this is really good redwolf03! love it exspecally kaila. I can't wait until part 3 comes out!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 25th April 2005
[comment]
Actually, that would be Part 2, because the first thing I wrote was just an intro. Thanx!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 29th April 2005
[comment]
I'm sorry, I know this fic isn't as good as my introduction. In fact, now I'm beginning to think it's a lot WORSE and pathetic. I guess I was just impatient to get it on the Web after two whole months, so I didn't spend enough time on it. Sorry to all diligent readers, this isn't my best work. Please keep the reviews coming, even if you have a few comments that say my story sucks. I want to know!
Reviewer:
Date: 28th May 2005
10/10
You're a better author than most professionials!!! By the way, I noticed a reference to the name Pet. If anybody wants, they could use the name or even Pet herself in their fanfic, at leat until my next fic comes out.
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 30th May 2005
[comment]
Gee, thanks, wdwf! *blushes* Pet's name just kind of popped into my head while I was writing this fanfic, so I wrote it down and voila! it stayed there. It seemed like a suitable name for Kaila to mention, since she's a pet dog.
Reviewer: wdwf
Date: 10th June 2005
10/10
Come to think of it, I'm not sure where I got the name. Oh, that's right. I know way too many people from the United Kingdoms. (Carry along, pet/luv.)
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 11th July 2005
[comment]
Anybody gonna review? It's been a long time...
Reviewer: Balto875
Date: 13th July 2005
10/10
I'm reveiwing to say: This is a nice fanfic
Reviewer:
Date: 28th August 2005
10/10
Wow.. This was very touching and well written! Definite 10! way to go!
It's the intro to a new series about Balto and Jenna's second litter.
Reviews:
Reviewer: whitewolf27
Date: 10th March 2005
10/10
nice job redwolf03! I really like this story! I can't wait till the next part!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 13th March 2005
[comment]
OK, I just wanted to say that I'm working on the next part, and that hopefully it will be on soon. I definitely think this intro could have used a little more work, but oh well. I just want to see what the rest of you guys out there think of it!
Reviewer: Frost Wolf
Date: 18th March 2005
10/10
That was very good...in par2 are you gonna put aleu or kodi in it???? i hope you put kodi in it him and balto are my favorite!!!!!
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 19th March 2005
[comment]
I'll think about putting Kodi in it, but it's probable he's not going to be. Oh well, I'm not sure how many parts there are going to be, but I'd say at least 5, so Kodi might be in one of them!
Reviewer: David Noble
Date: 30th March 2005
8/10
This is a good fic! I liked the idea of Balto and Jenna having a second generation of puppies! But some parts were gross, like where Jenna gave birth. And why call the puppies demons?
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 31st March 2005
[comment]
At least I didn't go into the details about the birth, like all the blood, and the slimy bag that Jenna would've had to bite the puppies out of, and all that gross stuff. And I didn't mean the puppies were demons, I meant the pain felt like there were demons inside of Jenna. I'm always hearing how much giving birth hurts, so that's what I imagine it would feel like. I feel like kicking myself over the head if I made the puppies sound like THEY were the demons! They're...well, puppies for goodness sakes! I'm going to have to work on that!
Reviewer:
Date: 2nd April 2005
10/10
...amazing... Great first fanfic! One of my faves.
Reviewer:
Date: 11th April 2005
9/10
it was awesome dont stop writing here! (tell your sis i said hi)
Reviewer: redwolf03
Date: 24th April 2005
[comment]
Will do.
Reviewer: Cole The Coywolf
Date: 3rd October 2005
10/10
Reminds me of a line a man said in a movie i saw. It's a stupid thing to say but here it is: For within each seed, there is a promise of a flower, and within each death, no matter how small, there is always a new life. A new beginning. Amen. Silly is it? I feel stupid putting it there. There's more of the line but, i don't think you wanna hear it. If you don't like it Red Wolf03. I understand.
Reviewer: Cole The Coywolf
Date: 3rd October 2005
[comment]
And Nice story Red Wolf03.
Reviewer: Cole The Coywolf
Date: 3rd October 2005
[comment]
If you want to know the rest of it. I'll give you the address.
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0103644/quotes
Well............ There it is. If you never watched the movie. You should. I loved it.
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