It is about four years after Balto's heroic quest to save the town of Nome. Balto and Jenna have two more pups and Balto, thinking he was a failure with Aleu, is trying his best to be a good dad. Then Jennafinds out some bad news adn decides to travel two hundred miles away to a town called Shshmaref. What follows is a story of adventure, love and family. Balto, Jenna, Boris, and even Aleu join a host of new characters in this story of hope... Balto Jenaa's Journey.
This took me four and a half years to write, hopefully people will enjoy it, I'm talking, to Universal, about getting it published. It is 244 pages long. It explains Balto as well as Jenna's past. Hope you like it.
- Rotramel |
| | Reviews: | | | | 19th January 2005 | 10/10 | | | IT WAS WICKED it was amazing it was long and its the best one iv ever read its was maazing did i say that? IT ROCKED MAKE AN OTHER it would be kool. make sure u go to a publishing furm that did the balto junior fiction thing they SHOULD PUBLISH IT
MAKE SURE U MAKE ANOTHER ONE if i could id give it 2000000000/10 but it only lets me do 10 | | | Beo | 20th January 2005 | 9/10 | | | lol i wish i had more time to read this, but i've been pretty busy working so i've only skimmed the first few pages. From what i've read, you have a great attention to detail in your work, and I am thoroughly impressed by that. There's one small thing i'd like to suggest, though, on your future writings, and that would be to make the character's and their dialogue a little more fluent (once again, i'm not trying to insult your work, as it is excellent. lol if only i had the patience to work on 244 pages on my stories). "The dialogue itself is good. It isn't as dull and straight-to-the-point as i have seen in quite a few fanfics..." The malamute/wolf hybrid continued on, his voice quiveing a little and his body shivering from drinking too much Mountain Dew, "But in a sense, make them appear a little more active as the dialogue goes on." The hybrid let out a yawn before sitting down and continuing. "I'm unsure of if you had already done this in the later parts of the story. Like i said, i really haven't had the opportunity, and your writing probably became considerably better as the years went on, but just make the characters a little more animated during the dialogue." Beo shrugged to himself, soon beaming a smile, "But besides that, great job ^_^." | | | | 27th February 2005 | 10/10 | | | This is a very interesting story. It combines action, drama, comedy, and adventure without using too much of just one. There aren't very many stories that are like this one, so I reccomend(if you have the time) to read this story to all who hear me! Good job, Rotramel. | | | | 1st April 2005 | 10/10 | | | great job ! i hope it gets published. do u mind if i put it up on my fan page ? i wont put it up with out ur permission .
roxy | | | Rotramel | 12th October 2005 | [comment] | | | If you want to read my other works (18) go to Baltosource.timduru.org/Balto.html
That's where I'm posting them now.
Thanks for the kind words! |
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